Adam Privett refines...

  At first I wanted to just create an interesting story.  Then as it evolved I also wanted it to serve second hand as part of a broader script.  The idea throughout was to maintain the semblance of art while crafting ever-increasing dialogue.   I tried to construct this piece as to be both readable and watchable I tried to warn people of chip technology—and, of course, the inherent suggestibility of anyone born a G The first part of this story is a redemption piece.   - The second part of this story is an admonishment piece Initially, during the first entry of the second part, I wanted to make Calvin the good guy (as part of his redemptive come to Christ moment--which, unfortunately for Calvin, was more of a mental understanding for the need of redemption, and not a contrite longing for unification because of his wrongdoings) But, given the material that I wanted to cover and the humorous bent that it needed to be entertaining, I endowed Calvin with a ...

  Calvin was coming out of his shell  Feeling comfortable around others  But has what was to be known  Become lost in the cluttered  For to understand what is shown  Is to see more than others' utters  One must follow the rabbit hole  To implications undiscovered  But now that Calvin's all alone  Can he fathom beyond the stutters  For he's been stuck in others' flow  With seeds of thought others' mustered  And as he prepares to watch his show  Will he see more than just their colors  And past repartees which he hones  For his conversational succors  [...] As he prepares his late-night meal And to watch his favorite show He adds some final touches And he downs some edibles For since Calvin quit the booze He found it unrewarding to be alone But he didn't want clingy Charlene To ruin the solace he finds at home For women they tend to talk  And he just wants to eat while stoned And find out all the lat...